Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, September 05, 2014

'production Journey through The legends

Reflection for the Production Journey Through The Legends

Something I was pleased with was that I was not nervous.  
I really enjoyed learning my speech that I do.

Something I found hard was to do my line slower.
Something that made me think was that I had to do my speech louder.
Something I want to get better at is my moves to the song.

My favourite part of the production was the Seven Whales.

My best bit of feedback for the production was from… my mum and dad. They said  to me that “ I did a amazing job you did your best. That’s what they said to me and Oscar.

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Thursday, September 04, 2014

A friend

photo (11).JPG This is what I did it is      so awesome I love I put my best effort into it. It is all about a friend and it will help you get a friend to so those people that don’t have a friend read this and then you will get a friend so do it.

                                           A FRIEND
        A Friend is a kind of a person that cares for you
                    A Friend will let you use there soccer ball
                               A Friend will be nice to you
                    A Friend will let you go to their birthday
                      A Friend will let you go to their house
          A Friend will play with you and you play with them
           A friend will peel the plaster of gently off your cut

                               made by Jack Wilkinson

      
 

Wednesday, September 03, 2014

Dear Diary

WALT: record and share our thoughts. Text type: Diary
Success Criteria
Self assessment
Buddy Assessment
Teacher Assessment
Introduce yourself and your role “Dear Diary...”



Honest thoughts and feelings at the time



Likes and dislikes



Expression / Personality (sounds like you)



Date plus optional title for each entry



Actions from practice and performance




Great examples here: Link

13th of august
Dear Diary, let me say what my name is.It is Jack. noooooo it is the first day of the production
practice I am so nervous. I am one of the 7 whales When my name was called out for the 7 whales.
I was like this when my name got called out for the whales   I am a whale year year!!!!!!.
own speech my I like to dive deep to here the old grumbling groper and check out the dozy John dory.
Its really hard to remember your line but when you have done it lots of times you get used to so that is

good. we have performed to the to the adults we have done it about 5 times and we are doing one tonight
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Friday, May 09, 2014

IN THE HOILDAY

Key words: Fun sweating stuck

I jumped off into a soft landing weeeeeeeee that was so fun! I went to the   funnest one that was there. It was a bit hard on the rock climbing wall. Oh no I was stuck on top of  the rock climbing wall. And then there was a nice person that helped me. This is what he said to me you look all sweating. I was like yeh. Because I have been playing around really  hard and thats why I am sweating. Then I went down the slide and then I got stuck again
because there was  a big wall that was bigger than me.  

Thursday, April 17, 2014

Flax rock


 flax rock!On friday my class went to flax rock the climb centre. It was tall as I bet my family can't climb it      FlaxRock (1).JPGbecause they don't have the guts to do it. It was about 30 meter or 70 meter tall. The first one I did was Mr M's one. That one was the hardest out of all of them I got about half way but  I went up just one more step. I yelled out to Mr M. I said can you put me down. How much times did you I touch the top? I touched the top about 10 or 9 times. But man that was so FUN I wish I could live there for my whole life.

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Whirlpool

 This is how to make a whirlpool
             This is how I make whirlpools
                                    by Jack Wilkinson

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My Oscar

 THIS IS MY OSCAR
                               This is what my brother does

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I AM...


This is my I am poem.

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

my holidays abc

my holidays abc
away
bees
cars
didn’t do much
eat cake
fast
grass
hay we had to feed cows
I did a bike ride
Jafes
kayaking
laughing
motorbike all day long
orange
pandora
quite
running
sun
train
upside down
vistar my team
Wellington
xray
youtube
knitting at mum
zsniping